
"A Tall Vanilla Order" by Tonya Adolfson is a narrative exploring the surreal and unsettling experiences of Mitchell Freeman, who finds himself in a version of Hell that resembles his hometown of Boise, Idaho. The story begins with Mitchell waking up in familiar surroundings, only to gradually realize that he is in a peculiar afterlife where societal norms and moral consequences are distorted. The setting is a campus environment where Mitchell interacts with various characters, including Carl, an assistant football coach, and a barista referred to as "Cutie." The plot unfolds as Mitchell navigates this world, where women are frequently victims of violence, and societal issues are amplified. The narrative delves into themes of gender dynamics, societal expectations, and the consequences of actions in a world where traditional moral structures are absent. The characters grapple with the realization that they are in Hell, each trying to understand the rules and the purpose of their existence in this realm. Mitchell's interactions with other characters reveal a world where men and women experience different realities, with women often facing dire consequences. The story critiques societal attitudes towards gender and the trivialization of women's experiences. As Mitchell attempts to make sense of his surroundings, he is confronted with the harsh realities of this Hell, where the rules are both explicit and elusive, and the path to redemption or escape remains unclear. The narrative is a commentary on the complexities of human behavior, societal norms, and the often-overlooked struggles faced by women. It challenges readers to reflect on the pervasive issues that affect both men and women, urging a deeper understanding of empathy and moral responsibility.
By Tonya Adolfson · First published 2016 · Genre: Speculative Fiction, Dystopian Fiction, Dark Fantasy · 13,545 words
Mitchell Freeman looked around. He was home, in Boise, Idaho. He could see the cross up on Table Rock, and Bogus Mountain where he and his family went skiing. It was a beautiful late spring day. He thought it was winter, before the dream of going to Hell, and he vaguely remembered a car accident, but he must have dreamed that, too. He was in the student center at Boise State and the clock in the main seating area said eight-thirty.
"It was a dream."
fiction · contemporary · mystery · psychological · drama · character-driven · plot twist · introspection · urban · relationship · identity · coming-of-age
A Tall Vanilla Order is listed on Textopian as a novella by Tonya Adolfson, dated 2016 CE.
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