
The speaker asks whether Venus, rising from the waves on a shell in Botticelli’s vision, could be more beautiful than the beloved. He contrasts Botticelli’s painted rosebuds with his own words, which he scatters around the beloved’s overwhelming loveliness like a veil of silvery mist. To him, the beloved stands suspended in vivid blue air, surrounded by bright winds and walking on sunlight, while the waves that come before her stir the sand at his feet.
By Amy Lowell · First published 1930 · Genre: Lyric Poetry, Romanticism, Imagism · 167 words
Tell me, / Was Venus more beautiful / Than you are, / When she topped / The crinkled waves, / Drifting shoreward / On her plaited shell? / Was Botticelli's vision / Fairer than mine; / And were the painted rosebuds / He tossed his lady, / Of better worth / Than the words I blow about you / To cover your too great loveliness / As with a gauze / Of misted silver?
For me, / You stand poised / In the blue and buoyant air, / Cinctured by bright winds, / Treading the sunlight.
And the waves which precede you / Ripple and stir / The sands at my feet.
Venus Transiens (Amy Lowell) is listed on Textopian as a poem by Amy Lowell, dated 1930 CE.
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poetry · modernism · imagism · nature · love · emotion · sensuality · beauty · transience · feminine · symbolism · introspection