Bleedback by Winston K. Marks (2018)

The narrative centers on a revolutionary device developed by two brothers—a mathematician who discovers a peculiar way to make metal vanish using an application of an imaginary number in an electrical circuit, and a practical-minded mechanical engineer who exploits his sibling’s brilliance for profit. Initially introduced as a low-cost, harmless kid’s toy, the invention unexpectedly causes metallic items to disappear into another dimension. The device proves to be far more dangerous than anticipated when the vanished metal returns slowly and unpredictably, causing microscopic yet lethal punctures in people, vehicles, and objects. A police investigation unfolds following a suspicious incident where one of the inventors suffers a nearly fatal injury from a tiny, needle-like perforation on his head. The investigator discovers disturbing evidence of deliberate tampering and hidden components in the workshop of the victim. As the inquiry deepens, it becomes apparent that the mechanical brother—driven by greed and a desire to monetize the breakthrough—has hurriedly marketed the device without fully understanding its implications or perfecting its safety mechanisms. He suppresses crucial details about an incomplete device intended to recover the vanished metal, leaving a gap that eventually turns into the catalyst for disaster. Soon after the device hits the market, widespread calamities erupt. The return of these microscopically small, high-velocity metal fragments begins to inflict a cascade of injuries across the nation: people suffer from fatal internal wounds, and the phenomenon triggers a deadly epidemic of peritonitis as countless small puncture wounds become entry points for severe infections. Large numbers of victims, including children and adults alike, are overwhelmed by the cumulative effects of these injuries, and panic spreads as the injuries advance in a horizontal pattern on moving objects and living beings, while stationary objects remain largely unaffected. Amid mounting chaos and a collapsing public health system, authorities and scientists race to understand the anomalous behavior of the metallic particles. Efforts to reverse the process using an “extractor” based on the incomplete formula fail, leaving the metallic shrapnel to return slowly over extended periods—potentially causing harm for months or even years. The investigative officer, disillusioned by the moral shallowness of the mechanical brother’s actions, probes into the origins of the invention, the nature of the malfunctioning recovery device, and the ethical implications of commercializing such unpredictable technology. As the crisis deepens, emergency measures are implemented: scientists develop a rudimentary detection system utilizing everyday objects as markers to warn the public of imminent danger from returning particles. This makeshift solution, though ingenious, underscores the pervasive, patchwork nature of society’s response to an unforeseen technological hazard that has spiraled out of control. The narrative is a stark exploration of the unintended consequences when scientific innovation is driven by commercial greed without adequate oversight. It juxtaposes the triviality of a child’s toy with the enormity of a national catastrophe. Through a relentless unfolding of events, the story examines themes of ambition, ethical responsibility, and the vulnerability of society to destructive forces unleashed by hasty technological advancements.

By Winston K. Marks · First published 2018 · Genre: Science Fiction, Detective, Thriller

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