Termarter Sorce by C.J. Dennis
The narrative follows a man's tumultuous morning, marked by a painful toothache and a series of misunderstandings with his wife, Doreen. The protagonist expresses his frustration with the lack of sympathy he feels from her, as she seems oblivious to his discomfort. He reflects on the nature of their relationship, feeling that his wife treats him with a lack of understanding, as if he were merely a block of wood rather than a partner in pain. As the day progresses, he grapples with his emotions, oscillating between irritation and a desire for connection. He criticizes the triviality of her responses, such as offering him seed cake and asking if he wants "termarter sorce," which he finds infuriating given his condition. His internal monologue reveals a deeper longing for empathy and recognition of his struggles, contrasting with Doreen's seemingly carefree demeanor. The protagonist's frustration culminates in a confrontation where he vents his feelings about the lack of support he perceives from her. He articulates a desire for understanding rather than mere platitudes, lamenting that some wives might not grasp the seriousness of their husband's pain. Despite his outburst, Doreen remains calm and responds with a maternal tone, which only exacerbates his feelings of being belittled. As the conversation unfolds, he realizes that Doreen's concerns stem from a fear of him returning to old habits or bad influences, which she subtly hints at. This revelation adds complexity to their dynamic, as it highlights her protective instincts and the underlying trust issues in their relationship. The protagonist's frustration begins to wane as he recognizes her intentions, leading to a moment of reconciliation. Ultimately, the day transforms from one of conflict to a more harmonious state as he acknowledges Doreen's love and care, despite the earlier misunderstandings. The narrative captures the nuances of marital communication, the struggle for empathy, and the complexities of love, all set against the backdrop of a seemingly mundane day. The protagonist's journey reflects a deeper exploration of human relationships, emphasizing the importance of understanding and connection amidst life's trivial challenges.
By C.J. Dennis · First published 1921 · Genre: Poetry, Humor, Domestic Fiction · 2,017 words
First lines
It was n't kid stakes. I 'ad no crook lurk To act deceivin', or to treat 'er mean. I'm old enough to know them games don't work - Not with Doreen. Besides, deceit ain't in me bag uv tricks. I got a few; but there is some that sticks.
Sticks in me gizzard. Some blokes sees no wrong In workin' points, an' thinks it bonzer sport To trifle with a wife's belief, so long As they ain't cort. But, when yeh play the game on dead straight lines, It 'urts to be accused uv base designs.
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- Work type: Short story
- Author: C.J. Dennis
- Date: 1921 CE
- Language: English
- Genres: Poetry, Humor, Domestic Fiction, Satire, Narrative
- Length: 2,017 words
- Structure: 1 section, 26 paragraphs
- Reading fit: Very Easy (5th Grade or below)
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Genres
- Poetry — The work is written in verse, employing rhyme and meter typical of poetry.
- Humor — The narrative contains comedic elements, particularly in the protagonist's exaggerated reactions and misunderstandings.
- Domestic Fiction — The plot revolves around domestic life and relationships, focusing on the interactions between the husband and wife.
- Satire — The poem critiques social norms and gender roles, particularly in the context of marriage and communication.
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