A Valediction of my Name, in the Window

A Valediction of my Name, in the Window

A poet has had his name engraved into a windowpane with a diamond, and he addresses the woman whose window it is, arguing that this scratched name will secure his claim on her heart while he is away. He tells her that his firmness has passed into the glass, making it as hard as the stone that cut it, and that her eye will make it precious enough to rival any diamond. The glass, being clear and all-confessing like himself, does more than resemble him: because of love's power, it also reflects her own image back to her, so that in looking at his name she sees herself, and he declares that here she sees him, and he is her. He tells her that just as no single letter or mark of the engraved name can be washed away by rain or storm, so he himself will remain unchanged through all times, and that she, possessing the actual pattern of him with her, is even better able to preserve that constancy than the glass is. He then offers an alternative reading, in case this teaching is too difficult: she may instead treat the scratched name as a death's head, an emblem meant to preach the mortality of lovers, or think of the rough, bony-looking letters as his own ruinous anatomy, a kind of skeleton. He then imagines his soul as wholly contained and enclosed within her, saying that in her alone he understands, grows, and sees, and that the "rafters" of his body, his bones, will come again while he remains with her, along with the muscle, sinew, and vein that "tile" the house of his body. He extends this until his return repairs and recompacts his scattered body, comparing this reassembling power to the virtuous influence the stars are said to pour into engraved characters when those stars hold supremacy. He notes that since the name was cut into the glass at a time when love and grief were both at their height, no door can now shut out this name's influence: it will make her more loving in proportion as she grows more sad, and he insists that until his return she should mourn daily, since he says he dies daily. He then imagines a scene in which her careless hand throws open the window bearing his trembling name in order to look out at some other man, whose wit or land might launch a new assault on her heart. He asks her, in that moment, to think of the engraved name as alive, and to recognize that in gazing past it she offends his Genius. He further imagines her maid, softened and corrupted by a rival lover's gold and persistent attentions, laying that rival's letter at her pillow, arguing over it, and taming her resistance until she begins to relent toward him; at that point he asks that his own name step in and hide the rival's name from her sight. He continues that if this incipient betrayal goes further, to the point where she actually writes back to the rival, he asks that in writing the superscription, his name flow into her imagination from the windowpane, so that even in the act of seeming to forget him, she in fact remembers him rightly, writing to him unaware. Finally, he acknowledges that glass and inscribed lines cannot by themselves preserve their firm, substantial love, admits that the nearness of death is inflicting on him a kind of lethargy that makes him murmur these very words in his sleep, and asks her to excuse this idle talk on the grounds that dying men habitually talk in this way.

By John Donne · First published 1633 · Genre: Metaphysical Poetry, Love Poetry, Valedictory Poetry · 686 words

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My name engraved herein / Doth contribute my firmness to this glass, / Which ever since that charm hath been / As hard, as that which graved it was; / Thine eye will give it price enough, to mock / The diamonds of either rock.

'Tis much that glass should be / As all-confessing, and through-shine as I; / 'Tis more that it shows thee to thee, / And clear reflects thee to thine eye. / But all such rules love's magic can undo; / Here you see me, and I am you.

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metaphysical-poetry · love-poem · valediction · separation · devotion · window-imagery · name-inscription · melancholy · absence · physical-spiritual-transformation · permanence · impermanence

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