Electron Eat Electron by Noel Loomis

Name: Electron Eat Electron
Author: Noel Loomis

"Electron Eat Electron" by Noel Loomis is a science fiction story set in a future where warfare between civilizations is conducted not by soldiers but by individual champions operating vast electronic weapons systems, with the outcome binding on entire hemispheres. The Western Hemisphere is represented by Jeffrey Wadsworth, the sixteen-year-old President of the United States of the Western Hemisphere, a product of the Mutant College, an institution established two centuries earlier to breed and select superintelligent, physically superior individuals specifically to serve as electronic war champions. Jeffrey's IQ of 340 and his reflexes faster than light make him the most capable mutant available, but Supreme General Hoshawk, the grizzled chief of staff, distrusts him on account of his youth and his cavalier attitude toward the gravity of the situation. Hoshawk believes that conventional military force, trained soldiers and tanks, would be more reliable than this civilized arrangement of electronic combat, and he never entirely suppresses his skepticism even as events unfold. The Eastern enemy, the Hunyas, are represented by Forgacs, their thirty-three-year-old president, older and more experienced than Jeffrey, who has challenged the Western Hemisphere on a legal technicality relating to a treaty violation involving withheld scientific discoveries. Both sides have prepared extensively, and at six o'clock the two presidents take their seats before vast electronic keyboards in underground chambers and begin a war conducted entirely through rockets, atom bombs, explosive screens, and electronic countermeasures, all controlled by the operators' fingers moving across instrument panels while watching illuminated maps tracking the movement of weapons systems across the Atlantic. Jeffrey and Forgacs exchange salvos and probe each other's defensive screens in a contest of calculation, speed, and tactical deception. Jeffrey determines that Forgacs is protecting Marseilles unusually carefully, deduces that Forgacs' command chamber must be located nearby, and constructs an elaborate combined assault using submarines, robot tanks, flamethrowers, and atom bombs to obliterate the Marseilles sector and destroy Forgacs' chamber beneath it. He wins the electronic war within the agreed rules. However, the victory proves incomplete. Even after Forgacs' chamber is destroyed and the Starter confirms that the Hunyas president cannot respond, explosions begin detonating across America. Forgacs has secretly dispatched over a million manned bombers, submarines, amphibious tanks, and flamethrowers, all operated by live human beings who do not require electronic control from the now-destroyed chamber. This force begins systematically destroying American cities, with no electronic weapons remaining in American emplacements because Jeffrey had already expended everything in the final assault. Hoshawk regards this as final defeat and the collapse of Jeffrey's philosophy that war can be fought without human combatants. Jeffrey, however, reveals a secret countermeasure that the mutant community developed independently, without violating the letter of the relevant treaty. Nineteen sonic transmitter stations, hidden across the continent and staffed by mutants who were never evacuated, broadcast ultrasonic frequencies calibrated to detonate the specific explosive compounds used by Forgacs' forces. Jeffrey waits until the full extent of Forgacs' invading equipment is within the continental United States, absorbs the destruction of most of America's major cities, and then activates the sonic network. The transmitters detonate torpedoes, tank ammunition, and aerial bombs throughout Forgacs' ground forces, and after adjusting frequencies, they reach the airborne bombers as well, destroying them by the thousands. When the Map finally clears, Forgacs' entire invasion force has been consumed. America's cities are in ruins but the people survive and the hemisphere is saved. Jeffrey has vindicated his conviction that civilized electronic warfare, supplemented by scientific ingenuity rather than conventional armies, can prevail even against a treacherous enemy willing to break the spirit of the agreed rules. Hoshawk, who spent the entire crisis doubting the young president, concedes with gruff respect. The story ends with Jeffrey's disarming informality intact, his first concern after saving a hemisphere being a return to his squad's football strategy and, at Hoshawk's suggestion, a shared dish of pineapple-avocado ice cream.

By Noel Loomis · First published 1958 · Genre: Science Fiction, Military Science Fiction, War Fiction · 6,097 words

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Supreme General Hoshawk, chief of staff, watched with piercing gray eyes while the President of the United States of the Western Hemisphere, Jeffrey Wadsworth, lay relaxed under a cosmic-ray lamp, with no covering but a towel over his loins.

The surgeon-general of the Hemispheric Armies raised his hand, and the lamp receded.

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Work type: Short story
Author: Noel Loomis
Date: 1958 CE
Language: English
Genres: Science Fiction, Military Science Fiction, War Fiction, Political Fiction, Dystopian Fiction
Length: 6,097 words
Structure: 1 section, 183 paragraphs
Reading fit: Standard (8th-9th Grade)

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Science Fiction — The story is fundamentally science fiction, featuring advanced technology including cosmic-ray lamps, electronic warfare systems, sonic transmitters, atom bombs, robot tanks, and mutant humans with superhuman abilities. The setting is a futuristic world with genetic engineering and advanced military technology.
Military Science Fiction — The narrative centers entirely on warfare strategy and tactics, depicting a futuristic conflict between two hemispheres fought through electronic systems and robotic forces. The story explores military command, strategic decision-making, and the evolution of warfare technology.
War Fiction — The core plot involves a direct military conflict between the Western Hemisphere and the Hunyas, including battle tactics, weapon deployment, defensive strategies, and the ultimate victory or defeat determined through warfare.
Political Fiction — The story includes political elements such as the Hemispheric Congress, the Mutant College's role in selecting leaders, diplomatic protocols, and political implications of the war's outcome for civilization and governance.